Once we got the chance/option to resubmit and imporove our trailer, 4 members of our group decided it would be a great idea, as through evaluation we learnt alot about our trailer, and discovered some aspects that needed to be tweaked. I think it also helped to have a break away from this project, and then come back to it with a fresh mindset, which made it clear to us how it could be made better.
It was quick and easy to brainstorm as a group what new ideas we had for our the new and improved trailer because we all had similar opinions on our old trailer.
Our two majoe concerns with the original trailer is that it was;
a) repetitive
b) hard to follow
We decided there were too many shots of the torture scene, which made it repetitive and slightly boring, so taking these out was the first thing we decided to change. However we needed to fill up the time with something else, which worked perfectly becuase we agreed that the trailer needed dialogue, to help the audience along with the story of the trailer.
Deciding on exactly what dialogue took longer as we all had our opinions on not only how much dialogue should be included, but also how much of the plot the dialogue should reveal. We decided on a rough script of dialogue for Mia, which would combine with Deans phone call, so that it appears she is answering the phone and having a conversation with him.
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